Raining

Raining
The raindrops keep falling
Its flooding my entire world
And I don’t know how to drain the water..
It keeps raining inside my head
Overflowing my body
With stress and exhaustion
The rain falls from my eyes
Leaving them wet and sore..
I lay in the flood
I am drowning
It has taken over me..
 

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW
That does sound sad indeed =<
It was well written I must say though

[Brittany]

You evoke such a sadness with this piece.

I used to live in Portland, and it rains there alot. For the most part I loved it (rain breeds lushness), but it can gnaw away at you, leaving you feeling so utterly down and depressed. I really like the comparison you have here with rain and tears, as well as the elemental aspect vs. a torment in oneself.

This one is honest and to the point, and I thank you for that.