My Rocky Road

Ive havent really written a poem in this style, not in a long time anyways. So enjoy.

My Rocky Road

I’m back on this rocky road
And its been such a long drive
Everything seems to change
And I’ve only lost myself

On the road, I’ve found life
A lot of hope, love, and faith
But a lot of things are missing
And that’s where the bumps in the road appear

I protect my heart with a metal wall
And if your strong enough
You will be able to find your way around
And I’ll be standing there with a smile

I am very delicate like a feather
You have to handle me with care
If you drop me, I will fall to the empty ground
With nothing to catch or save me..

It takes a lot for me to trust
But that doesn’t mean to give up
Just make me believe you won’t hurt me
And I will open every bit of me to you

It doesn’t take a lot for me to love
I love the smallest thing on earth
If it were a lady bug to a human being
I’d fight for its life

Sometimes I think I should just start over
Everything that I've dreamed of
Has become so much harder than I realized
And every step I take feels like my feet are dragging..

Don’t ask me what’s at the end of the road
Either it be a dead end or a path to happiness
I do know everyone that loves me will be there
And that’s all what truly matters in life

Reviews

[Jason]

This was a good honest write, it seemed like a reflection as well as an instructional piece for you as well as for somebody else. Over all though good write.


"It takes a lot for me to trust
But that doesn't mean to give up
Just make me believe you won't hurt me
And I will open every bit of me to you"



Thanks

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I love the vulnerability of your writing. Challenging this person to love you while confessing that your love isn't a prize unearned. Good write!

[HorrorMaster]

Your poem is beautiful

[Frances O'Neill]

The poem is very simple and open, and your colors shine through!

[lindsay]

You express your feelings so great here and you let, what I think a lot of people feel, you let them know that they are not alone. You are really good writer!

[Bud]

This is another Fine example of your Wonderful ability to express your feelings. I believe that many readers will be able to relate to this, as I myself can. Just remember, no garden comes to fruition without being tended to. Excellent!

[B A S S E M A S H R A F]

you are a very good writer :D

keep on and never stop

i loved it so much

[lauren emily]

This poem expresses a lot...I think that a lot of people can relate to this(including myself).
This truly is a beautiful piece of writing and I enjoyed reading it :)
Very nice work,
~Lauren

[laceyjane23]

i really enjoyed this piece, it's a very honest and down to earth piece. it is a very good look at what a person is feeling like on the inside. Great job

Laceyjane

[ScorpioPoet]

i can really relate to this.. a very beautiful piece of writing.. great job!

[An owl on the moon]

So deeply moving... across your time and space... both the road and your internal journey are so beautifully expressed. Such a hopeful ending that uplifts. Thank you!