My Mixture

This write is a mixture of my emotions and my life.

My Mixture

I’m like the rose
That is dead on the stem..
You see me as the seed
But not blossoming
I am broken
I don’t have the tools
To be fixed..
Look me in the eyes
And I’ll look away
Holding the tears back
Ask me if I’m ok
And I always say yes
Doesn’t mean it’s the truth
I get so sleepy
But I stay up late
Just so I don’t have to wake up
And do it all over again..
I have keep having theses dreams
Where I am falling into the air
And I wake up with tears
You’re the only person
That can break my heart
Over and over again
Why must you do this..
Every time you take a puff
I slowly sink in smoke..
I reach my hand out to you
You just keep shoving it away
While you scream for help..
You are so unhappy
And you want someone
But why do you deny love?
I’ve learned to forget my past
But when it feels too real
It stays inside my heart..

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

A nice write for you. I enjoyed the emotion of you not wanting a conflict but the person does. You just want love and sometimes a person doesn't know how to accept it. One change unless I am not reading this right;

"I have keep having theses dreams"

Other than that I enjoyed yet another journey your writing has taken me.

[Tas]

Aww this is really nice :)

Can feel the pain in there

I have keep having theses dreams
Where I am falling into the air
And I wake up with tears


I've learned to forget my past
But when it feels too real
It stays inside my heart..

Cant wait to read more

[carnifex]

"I get so sleepy
But I stay up late
Just so I don't have to wake up
And do it all over again.. "

this poem was great =]
nice job

[closed account]

the one thing that I embelish? is the fact that we are human
and with that said, we are not perfect and we have our own
demons,, but the fact that you can take it out of you and
paste it on paper? or the screen is hope... nothing said undone
get it out,, release it it.. fact or fiction it is ART... and you
have it..

[unspokenguilt]

A very powerful piece you got there, kylie!
Such raw emotions, as always, thanks for sharing!
*smiles* elyssa

[ICE]

There is most definately some emotion here!


"Look me in the eyes
And I'll look away
Holding the tears back
Ask me if I'm ok
And I always say yes
Doesn't mean it's the truth
I get so sleepy
But I stay up late "

I can totally identify with these lines. Its hard to tell someone that you love that you're hurting...esspecially when its they who hurt you.
Just Amazing!

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW ...
What a well written piece ...
So marvelously done indeed !!!
Enjoyed it a lot :)