Love Struck

Love struck.. All I gotta say =)

Love Struck
I built these walls
Around my heart
Where no one could get in
Until one person came along
And beaten them down with his charm
I don’t know how I became to
Trust him more than anyone
Or why I fell so hard for his tenderness
And his passion is to die for
I fell in love with his heart
Not his looks, what he has, or his difference
He has this way of making me feel completely safe..
In his arms is where I want to be
There isn’t a better space ..
Sure, there’s other states
But I want to stay in his eyes..
I was worried I would never
Be taken by someone again
Because people made me believe that
But he proved them all wrong..
I didn’t think I would have moved on so fast
I’m sorry I hurt the person that I did
But I’m thankful that it happened
I finally see that I made the right choice
Even though he is not here now,
He lives inside my heart
Keeps me company
And I’ll never be alone..

Author's Note

I thought it was cute to put the red in, something different. Enjoy =)

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

The lovely pic here caught my eye ;)

... a very very nice poem indeed !!!
Just Beautiful in so many ways !!!

"I fell in love with his heart
Not his looks, what he has, or his difference
He has this way of making me feel completely safe..
In his arms is where I want to be
There isn't a better space .."

A Wonderfully Well Written Piece !!!
A Definate Favorite Of Mine !!!

[sheerpoetry]

i like this its honest and emotional

[Kelley]

beautiful write 1 I love the feeling I got when I read this
and I know the feeling quite well myself.

Thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[unspokenguilt]

The red was cool like a little burst of color throughout the poem...like the little changes that bring you hapiness, a great emotion and a Great Write!

Best wishes,
:) Elyssa

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such sweet and compassionate expression of your feelings... loved one will always remain in our hearts.

[Phantom Heart]

Love the way you express yourself, you blend of sorrow with joy, and joy with sorrow. Very well done, I really like it.