I Surrender

Sometimes when the storm has past, you start to see the sun. Hopefully I'm only walking down the right path.

I Surrender
When I thought running
From everything that hit me
Was the right thing to do
I was wrong.
Someone told me
“Don’t run, you will only get tired”
He was right with every word
I surrender with running.
When I thought letting
No love close to me again
Was the right thing to do
I was wrong.
He grabbed the hold of my heart
And showed me the light
I surrender my love to him.
When I thought this war
That I’m stuck in
Was going to beat me
I was wrong.
Everything I face
I make it out somehow
And keep fighting
I will never surrender the battle
That my life is in.
 

Reviews

[Vaishali..^_^]

its a very nice write...!and its so inspiring....!
i love it..!it was so beautifully penned...!^_^

[Voice]

Very beautiful after all love is the only house for all the pain and it can heal any wound. Just a lovely piece and also thank you for the review...

Voice

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Extremely well said. I'm getting use to your style, and you seem to have a flair for "love-longing" type poetry. I feel the most emotion in those types of pieces from you. You give a great ending message with this one. I thoroughly enjoyed once again......

[JadedSparrow]

Inspirational is the first word that comes to mind when I read this. There is an icey resolve in the closing lines that I absolutely love. What does not kill us, only makes us stronger. A truly wonderful write QP.

JS

[Greg Skura]

Somehow the universe unfolds as it should, Love happens when you are not expecting it!

[~Mary Ann~]

Life is full of battles... You win some you lose some.. but never give in the war. It is your life live it. You will learn many lessons along the way... I have learned to try, notice I said try.. to look for the good and be more open to it as well as the bad. We deserve good right? But somehow the bad always has a stronger hold. Keep fighting Quiet One.. You will win the war and have the life that you choose. :)

Love the honest emotion in your piece and the thoughts that roll though your mind. You are not alone.
There are so many of us who are there, been there, or about to experience it for ourselves.
It is a thoughtful piece.