You Have My Heart

You Have My Heart

A Poem by QuietPoet
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Happiness, here I come..

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You Have My Heart
I don’t know how this happened
But I am in a relationship.
I want to be with him.
For some reason its always been him..
Don’t ask me why it didn’t happen before
Because I have no idea
I didn’t see him, I was blind.
Now that we are together
I can’t stop smiling..
He is different than all the rest..
No one like I’ve dated before
I was so scared to do this,
But its like he scared the fear away..
I told him I need his help
He needs to cure me..
Hold me and never let go..
He promised he would never hurt me
And I’ve heard that plenty of times.
But I believe him and trust him.
I give you my heart
Please don’t break it..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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I will say that I am with Daniel. I will help Daniel murder him if he does anything, kylie. i promise. I love this poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


He better not hurt you. I know people. Give me a call and I'll teach him what it means to have a broken heart. I mean seriously, what I will do is reach into his soulless body and dig through the bones and tissue.

Once done, I will pull it out of him and I will show it to his face. His expression will be like "... dude, no way" and then I will throw it to the ground and stomp on it multiple times and I'll be like,

"Yeah, chico, your heart's not only broken, but it's all flat and gooey. Pretty useless to you now."

Oh, but I wouldn't stop there. The guy is soulless and now he's heartless... so he'll get back up menacingly with dripping blood and a big gaping hole in his chest. So then, my home dawgs and pretty much anyone who cares about you will take up knives and cut off his head and hold it high above in the sky. Then we'll put it on an anvil and SMASH it with a sledge hammer.

But it doesn't end there! To break your heart is a stupid move! Stupid moves are made by brainless people! So that STILL isn't enough to kill the prick.

So we just take a couple of shotguns, blow his legs off so he can't run away. Then we'll take aim and blow his arms off so he can't crawl away like the insect he would be and then we would take flamethrowers and burn his carcass and put his ashes in Hitler's grave.

So if he mistreats you, you let us know so we can make my awesome violent rantings come true.
WHO'S WITH ME!?!?!?!?!?

Posted 15 Years Ago


I was so scared to do this,
But its like he scared the fear away..

He needs to cure me..
Hold me and never let go..

What a wonderful poem. Are you involved again? I am so unsure of this poem. I want to believe you are talking about GOD but I am not sure. As always you have penned a wonderful poem again. Those lines I have selected above are great lines. They could appear as Haiku style poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2009

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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