Four Words

Four Words
"I love you Kylie"..
I can not explain
How much those words
Weaken my heart
They take the breath right out of me
I can not understand
How these four words
Can leak out of anyone’s heart
The tears pour out of my eyes
And I can not stop the flood..
How could anyone love me?..
I hurt everything I touch..
I ruin everything that is great..
And I can not let go..
 

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

This is so personal that I would not know how to give a review to it. I think that it is awesome and this person is very special and if a person is willing to be with you knowing all of your inadequencies then part of them truly thanks that you are special and loves you too. It is the weaknesses two individual can share together acceptingly that makes a relationship strong.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I feel your pain. Keep going further though. I would love to see you explore with this piece more! I understand completely how you feel! I feel the same way about myself. It has tons of personality and vulnerablitity! Really good write!

[~Mary Ann~]

I agree with all that has been said here in the previous reviews. I also ask you to really look and see... because maybe that someone sees somethign that you do not see. We are always harder on ourselves than anyone else. Look and see what is best for you... and then maybe you can give those four words a chance to come to full bloom..

Hugs.. :)

[just is]

Such a painful write here, Such strong emotion, Love can hurt i know that feeling, you have penned your feelings well.

[THE LOST ROSE]

I agree with Mr. Sharpe. This is very personal. I did not think you would get much more personal than the past but you still keep on wowing me. I can feel your pain and confusion in this write. It does translate well. You have to look deep into your heart and asked yourself did i do the best thing for me? If yes the pain will ease up quicker and you will move on.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Another very painful poetry that come from your heart, I dont think you so bad, its just the way you look at yourself , you need to change that, its not the real picture ...Me