We fight, But Lose..

We fight, But Lose..

A Poem by QuietPoet
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Life is hard. But family is suppose to be there to help.. Not put us down....

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We fight, But Lose..
We had family and friends over
Having a good time
Celebrating my grandma’s birthday
Until it leaded to an argument..
It all started at the dinner table
Someone brought up politics..
I’ve always told people
To NEVER bring that subject up…
Everyone has different opinions
And it always ends up a fight..
Then they brought up the economy
BIG mistake…
I wasn’t into the conversation
Because I knew I wouldn’t like what was said
I just found out later and I knew I would..
Apparently, my grandpa said that
My parents should just be happy
For what we got in life..
While my grandparents have
All this money tucked away
Living with no worry about going broke…
They don’t stress about paying bills..
If they can even pay them for that month..
WE DO! We struggle everyday.
I don’t feel a bit sorry for you
Until you come and walk a day in our shoes..
We fight everyday to make it
We are thankful for what we have
But scared of one day we will wake up
And lose everything we have..
I think there was a reason
Why I wasn’t apart of that conversation..
I would have blown up in all their faces
I try so hard to keep up with my bills
And at the end of the month
I’m left with just a few dollar bills..
And I got another college bill coming…
My parents are on the thin line
Of going broke and losing everything
Its hard living the way we live..
If they only could see and understand
They would realize its not easy..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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we are all going through this. i have already told you how bad it got for me.
the fighting never ends. i feel as though it never will. keep up the good work.

cole-

Posted 15 Years Ago


In the times we are living in today just focus on the LORD. Do not focus on what you do not have or what someone else has. The LORD will bless. Keep writing. I like being inside of your life even if it is just a piece. No other writer on this site does that for me. Just you!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Honey, you're in the same boat with all the rest of us. We all fight but we lose. What matters is that we keep fighting and we never give up. Living paycheck to paycheck is scary. I do it every month. But the point is, I'm doing it and so are you and so are your folks. That is what you should be proud of. You and they work hard for all you have. THat's why you appreciate it so much more.

Posted 15 Years Ago


No doubt religion and politics are two subjects that are bound to bring up differences... it is too bad when adults can't realize they can disagree without it becoming personal... I understand your frustration too as ost of us seem to be going through it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


You definitely get your point across. I feel some of the anger and frustration that this conversation gave you. Good write!.....

Posted 15 Years Ago


But scared of one day we will wake up
And lose everything we have..
I think there was a reason
Why I wasn't apart of that conversation..

This whole wriet is so true, these lines here, my gosh how i can relate, This is wonderful and so truthful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


You are right, no one can judge or tell you or your parents anything until they walked in their shoes, I think you wrote one day that you dad worked until 3 AM, thats a man that work hard for his family. There is no secure those days, ppl lose their jobs , No one is protected, we just try to survive , Yossi

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

too right
that's was a good piece.
You get your point across.
I liked the whole concept of the politics and the economy.
i enjoyed it, and see the point you come from
:]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 9, 2009

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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