It Still Hurts..

I just want all of it to go away.. Never mention it. Never think of it. Just be completly gone...

It Still Hurts..
I cried that entire day,
You held me in your arms
While I wept..
You saw me hurting,
So why must all of you
Remind me of the situation..
You all make fun of it..
While my heart keeps breaking..
Your suppose to be my family..
Why do you keep doing this to me..
You all saw how much it hurt me
I wish you could see
What you do to me..
And how it makes me feel
To keep reminding me
Is only going to make me
Hurt so much more
When all I want is
For all of it to go away..

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW !!!
and all you want to do is forget ..
and yet, your family is what keeps reminding you of all that pain and sorrow ...
WoW !!!

Great Piece !!!
Very Painfull Indeed !!!
It's Sad Really ... It Is :(

[Matthew V. H.]

It will never go away unfortunately. I have experiences of my own that i wish would be erased from my mind with the flip of a switch, but they will never leave me.
Your experience makes you who you are and allows you to look back on it with 20/20 vision that only hindsight can give.
Learn from these experiences but never forget them. For if you forget them you will make all the same mistakes.

cole-

[M. Amphet Salt]

Deep and emotional. You drown out your sorrow well in your words. I had a long time struggle with bi-polar (Still do sometimes) but I figured out one day to use my pain as a weapon and do to others what was being done to me. I have a motto I stole and I think I told you already, but "Peace is a lie" and their is only pain. It is what we learn from that pain that makes us stronger and the passion to what we must do with what we have learned that makes us powerful, even if it hurts another.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh this is such a painful piece of writing, I can really relate to it..
Beautifully sad it is...!

[THE LOST ROSE]

I understand your pain. When you are through with it it will make you a stronger person. It is suppose to hurt if you loved the right way. And loving the right way is the only way. Strength will appear beside you in your sleep. You will wake a much better person for having done the right thing. I am smiling at the new found you after the pain leaves.

[JadedSparrow]

Perhaps they joke about the situation in a not-so-well-thought-out attempt to make it easier for your to get through it. I know how it is. I know you want the pain to go away, and someday it will. The only thing I will say is learn from the experience. Know that to love is to accept the possability that pain will accompany it in your life. I really enjoy the overall honesty of your style. Keep your chin up dear friend...keep your chin up.

JS

[Gravedigger]

Such a shame, that your family is so blind to the cause of their actions. Nice, expressive poem.

-Gravedigger

[poetic soul]

been here.. it hurts! but its a phase... a short one.. will flee soon.. :) take care!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[just is]

I can relate to this one, been here, i hope your pains go away soon.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I understand your feeling , I know what you feel, I hope it will go away , very soon Yossi