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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Love Hurts

Love Hurts

A Poem by QuietPoet
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Love can feel like heaven, but it can hurt like hell..

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Love Hurts
I’ve made a decision
I don’t want love
Until I know what it is..
All I’ve seen is hurt
From the four letter word;
L.O.V.E..
I’ve been ruined by it..
I destroyed others by it..
I never see it survive..
Until the day I do,
Is the day I will accept
To be in a relationship
You have to be happy
With who you are..
I have to find what makes
Me truly happy..
One day I will..
Until then,
My heart is protected
With every chain
And every guard..
Your going to need
Something very strong
To break through..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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I am sorry you have only seen the horrid and painful side of Love. The other side is much better, and you have caught glimpses of it and i hope some day you will get to experience it fully.

cole-

Posted 15 Years Ago


There is an overwhelming since of disappointment from the epiphany that the author has. Not to mention the pain that made my heart ache. I think we can all relate to this one. I myself have hidden my heart in an impregnable fortress, or at least it seems that way. I guess Ill have to wait and see how it holds up to the next assualt by this emotion we cant seemto live without...great write QP. Thanks for asking me to read this one.

JS

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can feel the pain in this i used to have a barricade around my heart but i am so glad i opened it. Such an hurtful write, expressed well.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow I can hear the pain in this piece. I feel the same way about hooking up again. My saying is that God will lead me to my next love. I am not going to go on my own. For you I feel you see things the same way. Great write again from you. I never ever saw you as a Quiet Poet. You write with such power that it is loud.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Stick in there kylie...you'll find it!

all my love best wishes
:) elyssa

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What will melt you heart , what will make you love , you just wait and see :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 29, 2009

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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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