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If You Asked Me..

If You Asked Me..

A Poem by QuietPoet

If You Asked Me..
If you asked me what I want
I couldn’t tell you..
If you asked me what I need
I couldn’t say..
If you asked me why I never know
I don’t have a clue..
If you asked me why I put people before myself
I don’t have a reason..
If you asked me why I hurt
I couldn't be honest..
If you asked me why I love you
I couldn’t give just one cause..
If you asked me this to my face
I couldn’t give you a straight answer..

© 2009 QuietPoet


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this was good. I am glad i could finally get around to it.
Itf I asked you, this could mean so much. We could be asking you, but at the same time you could be asking us with out asking. if that makes sense.

This is a poem everyone should read and think on. The questions are plain, but it is the answers that are the hardest to find.

cole-

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this poem. It focuses on one emotion, insecurity and stays with it all the way through. It also has this child-like clueless innocense about it that will give you a good target audience with teenage girls and guys. Good Write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like this.

My favorite part is:
"If you asked me what I want
I couldn't tell you..
If you asked me what I need
I couldn't say.."

I know the feeling well, and I go through that in my head ALL the time.

Very nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this. Kylie, you are such a great writer. You have wonderful talent.

I know you'll go far!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This one said so much in so little words. Loved it - a masterpiece. It's wonderful! I feel the exact same way in my own personal life. Keep writing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I could ask you a hundred of things, but in the end it's up to you on whether or not to answer them.

Nice Write!
:) elyssa

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 11, 2009

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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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