I'm DONE!

***Please beware of language.. I rarely use such language in my writings, but this is one write I cant leave it out.

I’m DONE!

My boss scheduled me off

On Tuesday, just like you

If you ask me to hang out

I swear, I’m going to flip out

I wont be able to hold it in

I will tell you what I think of you and your stupid father

B***h, I’ll knock your a*s out

You think you have me

Wrapped around your finger

Think again, I don’t want to be your friend

You lie, you cheat, and you steal,

How the f**k am I suppose to trust you!

Your dad is treating me like s**t now,

Because you run and tell him

That I don’t want to hang out with you,

Get the f**k over it!

How old are you? 21!!!

You act like your 5!

I can’t stand you and him,

Your whole family can go to hell

I am sick of this,

I cant wait to say “I quit!”

What are you going to do?!?

You frustrate me to no end

Your racist against woman,

You walk around like you rule the world

You think your right and we are always wrong

But as long as a man tells you the same stuff we are

You believe it in a heartbeat

I’ve never hated a person this much

This is coming from me, the one that doesn’t hate..

I’m getting out of there,

AS soon as possible

I cant take it anymore,

F**k you,

I’m DONE!

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Go gettum' killer! lol This was a great rant and like Paul Thorn says, "Its a great day to whoop somebody's a*s!"

[C.J.]

wow i feel bad this is one of those things you do only when you have to feel better.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

It's always good to let off steam and not allow to eat at you. You did a great job expressing your feelings and your anger. Well written vent/poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Matthew V. H.]

Is this the same girl from your "Mystery 3" poem?

I'm sorry her true colors showed and she hurt you. This piece was full of rage and it radiated off the paper.

Get out as soon as you can and things will get better.

cole-

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

wow, they really piss you out, just try to relax , they are both nothing, don't waste your energy on those people, think of it as a lesson, you will pass it... I trust you will... leave that work, don't stay in a place when you are not wanted, and feel good ... Yossi