My Dream Life..

My Dream Life..

A Poem by QuietPoet
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Someday...

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My Dream Life..

My heart aches tonight…

So many emotions running

In all of my veins and insides..

Making me cry my eyes out

Scared to go to sleep

Because of the dreams I’ve been having..

Its not where I want to be..

Finding every reason to leave this city..

I see myself on the shore of the ocean

Looking deep into the sea with my love holding me..

Watching my kids play in the salty water

Leaving our footprints engraved in the sand

Gazing out to the lighthouse

And that will be the light

That my heart needs

I would take my family with me

Leaving nothing behind..

Having my career as a Chef

Owning the one thing I truly want..

Letting people smile at the taste of my pastry’s

To wake up wanting to go to work

With my family and love have a part in it..

No worries about money

Waking up without the same headache as yesterday..

Without running from all the things we fear…

Facing everything that comes at us with a fight..

Most importantly sticking together..

I would give anything to have my love by my side..

I’m holding on for dear life

For it not to fail or break..

It would leave two souls in sorrow..

I would give anything to make my family happy

To come home to a real smile

Is what my heart dies for..

I keep waiting for this dream to happen

Its imprinted in my heart

Only God can crush it..

And only I can make it real…

© 2008 QuietPoet


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I keep waiting for this dream to happen Its imprinted in my heart Only God can crush it..And only I can make it real�
I enjoyed these powerful lines in this piece. I know from your other writings that you know you are not alone in making your dreams real. The person that created us all will be with you all the way. Great poem again!


Posted 16 Years Ago


Wonderful display of emotions!!!
~~~~I'm holding on for dear life
For it not to fail or break...~~~~
Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautifully written. May your dream become reality and keep having wonderful dreams. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is really good. I love the last two lines, "Only God can crush it...And only I can make it real." That just is going to stick with me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great emotion...good job

Posted 16 Years Ago


Bravo, an excellent dream and a great write...may it one day come true!

best wishes,
elyssa

Posted 16 Years Ago


Amen!! ... it will happen , you will have that dream turn to reality , because you have so much love inside you and you willing to give .... will walk with you as far as you like.... keep my eye open ..... save the dream its so wonderful :).... Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


strive for this dream, if it is what you want. Don't let anyone, not even God, take you down. Put your mind to it and go!

This poem gave me mixed emotions, at first it is sad and then a little happy and then sad again. i like the rythem and than you for letting us into your dream life. We all have one.

Never let yours die.

cole-

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 7, 2008

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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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