My REAL first Time

It was amazing.

My REAL first Time

Walking up to the hotel room

My heart beating faster with every step

Finding no reason to turn back

Laying on the bed

He kisses me on my lips

Holding my body with his strong arms

He slowly takes off my shirt, then my bra

Kissing my breasts and stomach

Whispering in my ear

Asking if I am ok..

Caring for what I feel inside

Reaching for my belt and unbuttoning my pants

Off go my pants and underwear

I am fully naked on the bed,

Next he takes his pants and boxers off

Enjoying the sight of both of our bodies

He begins to move his hands lower

Asking if I wanted to have him inside of me

I said yes, and he began

Kept asking if I were ok

Going really slow

It hurt and I told him it did

And he stopped, immediately

Some points it didn’t hurt, so we kept going

Afterwards, he held me in his arms

Making sure I am alright

And not letting me go

Then a day later,

We make love again,

It was much better, because I am getting use to it

What we have is beautiful in everyway

I do not regret doing it,

I didn’t cry afterwards,

I wasn’t freaking out

And all I have is better memories

Letting go of that one scar that hurt me deeply..

Forgetting that moment and gaining this one..

I love you, Babe.

Reviews

[SelfHelp]

I love this. Even though it's about something that so many people make dirty and disgusting, it's so beautiful and clean at the same time. I love it.

[Kusanagi Kyosuke]

wanderful i think thats true love ^^

[THE LOST ROSE]

My first time was not like that. I felt sorry for the young lady I was with. I would of wanted her to have a memroy like this. Thanks for sharing this piece as well. You are on a roll. Graduating, finding and making love. Finger snaps for you and the poetry.

[Legion]

A wonderous moment indeed.

As for the writing, think about what happened and go deep. Pull out everything you have for that moment and make it a memory no one will forget. This piece (though understandable in its moment) seems lacking of the true passion and the gift of that night. You seem to have sold it short with the way you tell it. Seems more like a short news article than a passionate monument. Fall not into the mediocre and make it memoriable instead. Hope that makes sense. If you do rewrite it, I would be happy to reread it for you.

[Matthew V. H.]

I am so happy for you!

I know that sounds weird for something like this, but that is a HUGE step in healing over old wounds. I am glad he took his time and even more glad you enjoyed it. Love is the best, and making love is even better when it is with the one person you care about more than anything.

congrads on this step, and ALSO congrads on graduating!