Our Hearts

Our Hearts

A Poem by QuietPoet
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What we share, is what keeps me going.. To have my best friend Jake in my life, is truly a miracle. And to LOVE is what our hearts die for.

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Our Hearts

My best friends mother

Whispered in my ear

That she thanks me for taking care of her son for a year

I about died inside, because I didn’t know I did that for her

I didn’t realize how much she needs him…Until now

I can see her heart aching every time it beats

The moment the tears fell from her eyes

Was when my heart fell to the floor..

Watching her cry for something so bad.. L.O.V.E

What we all die to have in our lives

Where every feeling comes in the heart

And it fails repeatedly for her

Once she saw the ring on my finger

Brought her hope that there is love in the world

It makes her more happy that I have found it

Because the heartfelt in the ring..

For a couple to give each other promise rings

To see pass the scars and hurt..

I wish I could glue the pieces of her heart back together

And give her hope that love is still in the air for her

I did take care of her son..

But most importantly

He takes care of me.

© 2008 QuietPoet


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aww nice you are as good as ever i like this one it shows love between people that are soon to be family good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lovely piece! :) Yes, love does exist -- it's what this life is all about.

Very touching work my friend. Well written!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow...I was moved. This is a wonderful write. There is no scale for this piece. I am glad I decided to spend more time on your material because the honesty and creativity has bought a much needed smile to my face. Enjoy the Love, like the air we breathe.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2008

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