Strong Love

I love him.. so much..

Strong Love

When my whole world is sinking

He drains the water

Just wish he were here to wipe the tears..

But he will be..

I believe he can be the best

The one that will save me from all of this

Make me happy every single day

Just by the kiss from his lips

The way he holds me

When he gets home from work, he will be happy just to see me smile

And he cares for me, better than anything..

I see the future between him and I

Living with each other

Getting married

Having kids

Making it work each day

Laughing, smiling, and most importantly being happy..

I know there will be days where we are mad and such

But that wont bring us down

We have the kind of love where people wished they have

Its so strong, no one can break it apart

Even when we are miles away

That’s the hardest part…

But we are making it work

That isn’t going to stop me from loving him..

Reviews

[C.J.]

another good write i like this change of mood in your writing i think you show the love here perfectly!

[THE LOST ROSE]

There is a lucky man out there somewhere. Good write thanks for sharing this enduring piece with the reader.

[JadedSparrow]

::sighs::

I have almost forgotten what this sublime emotion you speak so fervantly of feels like. The conviction in which you speak of the love that you share brings tears to my eyes. This poem serves as a reminder to me that love is out there, she just hasnt found her way back to my heart. Blissful QP, absolutely blissful.

JS

[Dani California]

Ah, this is lovely! And it's so good to read something so happy and love filled from you. True love conquers all my friend.

Beautiful write!!

[chloe cruz]

This was really well written, I enjoyed it... the flow of it all seemed to just, well flow so well. I've been in many situations like this... actually just recently... *frowns because it still hurts to think about it after a month* Anyway, great job! Hopefully everything ends up... great and perfect!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I hope it will work :-) ... I really wish you so much Happiness my dear friend, I know you put on writting anything you feel and thats so beautiful... keep some hope and wishes to the moment you meet... Yossi

[Matthew V. H.]

I was in your situation with a girlfeind once. we were seperated by a five hour drive. It hurt so bad to be away from her but we made it work for about a year.

if you are wondering what happened between her and I; I married her.

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Beautiful poem, my friend! Yes! Strength and perseverance will see you through the distance!

I love how eloquently, yet so truthfully, you craft your feelings into the written word!

You so rock!