Let It All Out

Let It All Out

I was talking to him

In a text message

And all of the sudden

I break down,

Big tear drops run down my face

I rest my head on the table

And just think about my whole life

Will my father be ok?

When will I be in my lovers arms, forever.. Not just for a weekend…

I hate my job, I’m not happy there

Is my best friend coming back home?

Are my sisters ever going to be happy…

Will my brother ever learn from his mistakes..

The scar on my heart, will it ever heal…

I just want to wake up with a smile

Wanting to stop taking deep breaths to calm me down

Its been days since I cried

I just needed to let it all out

And that’s the only way I could.

Every bit of my emotions

Were locked inside

And I couldn’t keep it in any longer

I was trying to be strong

But I failed deeply..

I think to myself

What is so wrong..

I can never answer

I just look around me..

Reviews

[Matthew V. H.]

Crying is our way of dealing with the hard things that we think are too big. Crying makes us feel better and lets our emotions show. never be ashamed of it. This was a great poem and i for one can feel where you are coming from.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Your cry was just what you need , to take it all out , to relax , not taking all on yourself ... sometimes it hekp to cry , Yossi

[C.J.]

wow so sad you stoped it like you could say more but you yourself could not. sad write.

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sometimes it does get frustrating with all those questions and just no answer in sight... and sometime we even lose the power to cry..... the tears dry up..u have no strength left... but still you keep going...looking for that hint of light in the dark tunnel called life... and trust me friend... you are just about to meet sunlight .... don't lose hope cuz your questions will soon answer themselves... just trust yourself and believe in how special you are...

a very beautiful poem... hope u feel better soon...:)

[unspokenguilt]

cry...a good cry never hurt anyone. I'll cry with you, it's soothing in a way, why is that?
I feel for you! don't let the things we can't control have the better of you just hope tommorows better.
:) I hope all turns out well for you.

[Gravedigger]

Everyone needs a good cry now and then. There is no such thing as strong enough by yourself, and those who claim to be are wrong. I hope that cry did you good..the rest of the answers will follow in god's good time.