Your Coming Home?

I need my best friend here.

Your Coming Home?

My best friend told me

That he is putting in his 2 weeks

At his job in New Mexico

And might be coming back home..

Don’t mess with my heart

Don’t say things you don’t mean

Saying that made me so happy

But I don’t know if your coming home

If you were here, things would be better

I would have someone to run to

I have no one here that is true

And with everything that has happened

You can take all that pain away

Just by a simple hug and I love ya..

And with my boyfriend not being here everyday

You would be the next best thing..

When you left I had no one

No one that cares for me

And that’s why I left all my friends here

I can’t trust them with anything

Like I can with you

And when you’re here

We can make plans to live together

So please tell me your coming home

I need you here so much

Your part of my family

And my heart cries out for you

You’re my best friend

And I miss you

Come home.

Reviews

[lauren emily]

I know the this feeling..One of my best friends moved a few months ago and I miss them terribly..:(
This is a wonderful piece. It's very straight forward..you said a lot. Nice work! :)
~Lauren

[THE LOST ROSE]

If he received this poem he should be home already. What a herat felt call to action. I enjoyed reading this and all of your reade request.

[Matthew V. H.]

It is always hard when your friend is in a different state. mine happens to be in California and i was the one who moved. You convey a lot of emotions in this and i love it.

[ape domenigoni]

I know what it's like to long for your best friend...you stirred up old memories...great write

[C.J.]

nice poem and just how much you put into this poem in a that many lines is crazy good job!!

[laceyjane23]

this is beautiful! and i can relate to it on every level, except i was the best friend that moved away, i miss my best friend everyday and my leaving has been hard on both of us, you did an awsome job on this, thank you for sharing it with us!
laceyjane

[Spoken]

a beautiful poem written for someone special in your life. It's always a blessing to have such a strong connection with someone as you do with your best friend. I hope he comes home for ya!

[W.Piggy]

--beautiful poem--
dun wry, :) I know you're strong, i really believe you are strong. =)
I can feel it... hehe.
A wonderful poem.
I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Emotions ran through me, it's touching, sad.
You did really well writing this poem.
Love, W.Piggy.

[Lyrical Love]

Great sentiment!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Wonderful news and a great poem, I loved anything , so special amd honest ... pure love ... Yossi