Me

Kylie Smiley :)

 

Me

I’m the kind of girl that laughs

When everyone else is dead silence

You will see me in the back of the crowd

I’m never the center of attention

Simply because I don’t want to be

I dance when no one is looking

I sing in the shower

I make people laugh

And I am very silly

I’m the girl that looks at you with the stare

Giving the guys “I’m not easy” look

I’ll knock you out if you hurt one of my own

I find a way to help anyone I can

You can take it or leave it

I’m your supergirl

I don’t cry in front of people

Because they don’t deserve to see my tears

I’ll stand up to anyone that I think is wrong

I was the girl in school where I sat in the back

But I would pop up and say something out of no where

I’m the one that went up to the nerds

And proved they aren’t bad people

Some of them became my best friends at the time

I’ll give advise to younger kids;

Don’t do drugs,

Have sex when your ready,

And stay in school

I make mistakes everyday

Well that’s because I’m human

And I will admit when I am wrong

I get hurt, dragged to the ground, and beaten

But not even that can stop me

Simply because I am me.

Reviews

[Matthew V. H.]

Supergirl! I like that.

This was great, i love the way you sum up your whole personality and it makes me want to just hug you. You seem like a great person and this poem makes you seem even better. You have a small undertone of "Don't change who you are" but i think this was more about you. The real you, and this is a you that makes me want to be me.

definitly one of your best!

cole-

[SelfHelp]

I like this. Of course. I like what you write. But this is so honest, and it's actually a lot like me too! Be brave and proud of who you are, you're wonderful.

[darkgurl]

This is just wonderful, I really enjoyed this write, just be yourself and don't ever change...Kim

[unspokenguilt]

Well, being you is perfectly fine, don't let anybody tell you otherwise.

Great poem!

The me that was describe sounds like an awesome person with much personality

congrads to the yous in you!

[Veronica Franco]

That is amazing. This should be printed for every young girl to read.

[Christine]

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM!!! I want to print it out and hang it up so that my daughter(who's 10) can read it. You just described who I was when I was younger and who I strive to find again now that I am rebuilding who I am. This is a favorite for me. AMAZINGLY written. Great Job. You are truly a great writer!
~Christine :-)

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

You seem very interesting! lol
I like the structure of this piece and as always I enjoyed reading!

[Michelle Lea]

Nice to meet you "the real you", this was an awesome write!! Keep writing!!!!! (-:

[C.J.]

WoW this is realy realy good i think this poem is one of the best ive read in a long while wow.

[Dani California]

This is awesome Kylie ... and yes, always be YOU!
Funny how some ppl are so quick to qualify or
disqualify others, yet I often wonder.. who are
these ppl and surely someone appointed them
judge without my knowing about it, right? I mean,
why else would they feel they are qualified to do so? lol

People.. such egos we have.

You go girl!! Be you because YOU are beautiful!
Loved this!! :)