Leave Me

Leave Me

A Poem by QuietPoet

Leave Me

When the rain has passed

Will you still stay with me

Do you think you can find my cure

Better than others have been

Why did he leave me with this fear

I’m trying to fight it away

But it fails every time

Why can’t I see passed the darkness

And set my eyes on the light

I have lost friends and loves

They all left me to suffer in my tears

How do I know all of you won’t do the same

To say you won’t doesn’t make me believe

Because the ones before said that too

And I was all lies

My heart is gentle and breaks easily

There’s only a few I trust in this world

They have proven that I’m staying in their hearts

You say you love me, but do you?

You say you care for me, but do you?

Why do I just see you leaving me…

© 2008 QuietPoet


Author's Note

QuietPoet
The reason I bolded the words in the last lines is because its a message... "Do you love, Do you care".. Tell me what you think

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I think that it is a very essential point that is often ignored because people want to be blind; they want to believe that they are well loved and cared about even if that is not true because that need is still there. I think you are a very brave person in raising that question, and I hope everyone you ask it to has a valid answer.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 1, 2008

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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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