Falling Into Fear

 

Falling Into Fear

I lay with this pain still in my heart

Forgetting the past is harder than I thought

It’s like something ripped me apart

And the wounds still remain opened

They are fresh and deep

All the blood pours out of me

Leaving me to shed my tears

Trying to fight what has become of me

Thinking I am the care in the world

But I am broken and scared

Letting no one close to me

That way I can’t get destroyed again

I was tricked and lied to, repeatedly

Anyone can make me a believer

The trust I hold is what is real in me

The things that have been said

Have been told to me before

It was just lie after lie, killing my insides

I’m in the same boat as him

When is the day we are set free, together

Leaving all of them behind, running from their hurt

Nothing but the memories locked in our minds

For you to steal the only thing that was mine

Is what fills me with regrets

And leaves me falling into fear…

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very scary! I love the flow and description! Good write!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Way to showcase your strength after that ordeal. Good write AGAIN!

[Mysty Rayn]

Trust is such a hard thing for me too. Sometimes you just have to cross your fingers and hope for the best. You can't place blame on your future for your past. I'm rambling...
Your poem is great. I really liked reading it and it really touched my soul.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A well well written poem, good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[C.J.]

very nice i injoyed this and it sounds like you put alot into this poem good job.

[lauren emily]

Trust can be a hard thing to hold onto. Sometimes, like you said, it can leave us falling into fear. We just have to figure out how to pick ourselves up.
Great work, thanks for the read request. I enjoyed reading this piece! :)
~Lauren

[Nely Amorim]

I think trust is something so hard to attain and retain... and when betrayed by lies and deceit the first thing we lose and hardest to get back. Very true piece and open. thank you for sharing and entering my contest.:)

[JadedSparrow]

"It's like something ripped me apart
And the wounds still remain opened
They are fresh and deep
All the blood pours out of me
Leaving me to shed my tears"

So painfully true that I had to stop reading for a moment...I am very glad that you sent me the request to read this poem. Its always suprising and even more disheartening to see that I am not the only one who feels so bleak. Very well written... My heart goes out to you. You know I am always here to listen.

JadedSparrow.

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Lies . . . so much hurt, pain and damage they can cause. You've captured this quite well throughout the poem. Never regret misguided trust. The capacity to love is a gift, and not everyone has this ability. The hurt and pain will slowly subside, and wisdom, not bitterness, will be gained in its place.

Brava!

[bluessadmood]

it seams you are still locked in your past and it was not lovely no,they left wounds open,blood sheds freely,and tears running down,it must be aweful broken and scared,you have closed on yourself ,thats the way you say you keep from harm from their lies and hurt but you just do not say what was that hurt,but the trust is still there though they stole from you ,leaving you with regrets and fear ,its a great strong writing ,i would edit it a little more and its then really perfect ,wonderful