My Life

My life is mine. And idk what happened to me, but I am alive. :)

 

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In beginning I said

Could this break my heart or save me..

In the end I’ve found my answer

It saved me

I asked for anyone to send me a cure

My cure was right in front of my face

It was to walk away from you

I have asked what path is mine

I come to realize

There is no set path

I just got to follow my heart

I have asked where is my heart

It was inside of my chest

This entire time

I don’t know how I could have ever lost it

I have asked how can I be happy

I did not find the answer

Nothing changed

Everything is still falling apart

And knocking me down

But I get up with a smile

I just needed to change for me

I woke up a whole new person

Taking life differently

Showing love to all of you

Laughing every chance I get

And living the life that is mine..

Reviews

[C.J.]

i noticed alot of your writing is simuler but the simularety is so small u have to read alot of your poems to see it. good job again

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very nicely written poem, thank you for sharing. Debileah

[JadedSparrow]

"Could this break my heart or save me..
In the end I've found my answer
It saved me"

I have asked this question often lately. I still dont have the answer. My life is very hard right now and this poem really made me smile. Thats something I havent done in weeks. Great job...as always. : )

JadedSparrow

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"I have asked what path is mine
I come to realize
There is no set path
I just got to follow my heart"

This poem speaks of inner wisdom gained through struggle and perseverance. The answers to our most desired questions always lie within us. You portray this with clarity and truth.

Beautiful.

[lauren emily]

This told a story, I love when poems do that.
This is definitely very inspirational, great work!
~Lauren

[Trip]

I really liked it. It showed us the beginning and dragged us along to the end. it was great. I'm happy you kinda of woke upa new person because it seemed like you were confused in the start.

keep writing

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

You've done a great job depicting struggles and triumphs so beautifully!
-Marv

[Dani California]

This is great! Yes, we endure and we overcome..
repeatedly. And though it may seem hopeless at times,
it never is. As long as we believe in ourselves and realize
who we are -- and that "we are" -- we can find happiness
and peace within.

Love this. Very inspirational! Thank you :)

[W.Piggy]

wow. great poem. hehe. :) makes me happy. so different from any poem i've ever read. keep it up. ^^

[Imperfection]

Humans are stronger than anything that can happen to them.
When we don't know what to do or how to get back on our feet after we've been knocked down, all we need to do is look inside ourself...there is all the strength that we will ever need.

I enjoyed this one very much. Very positive message in this.
All of us need to read such things once in a while.