The Moon

The Moon

I was driving home tonight

The moon was looking bright

And the clouds were surrounding

I wish I was the moon

It doesn’t ever get hurt..

Everyone loves it also

Even you..

If all the lights go out in the city

The moon is your light home..

I wish I was because you need the moon

And your going to realize that you need me too

But I’m going to be gone

Just like the moon is when the sun sets..

Sure the moon comes back at night

But it is a different one

Just like me..

Reviews

[Dalaina Renee]

Very good discriptive words. I really like your work!

[Natacha]

That is really beautiful like a little dance of emotions
I like the simplicty of that one phrase especially~
overall beautiful poem and writing





The moon was looking bright




And the clouds were surrounding

I wish I was the moon

It doesn't ever get hurt..

Everyone loves it also

Even you..

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[shinybluestars03]

Good poem.
The only thing is that the moon doesnt disappear when the sun
comes out you can still see it sometimes through the clouds
during the day. But yes she does come out in different shapes
all the time.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes