Battlefield

Battlefield

A Poem by QuietPoet
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My heart is fighting for something that will tear me up......

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Battlefield

I always find a way to fight

Because my life is always in combat

Some things are good

But I turn my back and its all wrong

Nothing ever goes right

I’m in a battlefield

And I am losing

Because the other side is beating me

I might as well run and hide

The energy I have is running low

And all the memories are fading

Just shoot me now and put me out of my misery

Don’t leave me here to bleed.. Please..

If your going to hurt me just kill me instead

I am not even going to use my guard

Because it always fails me

My body is broken into pieces

Because I’ve just been beaten

I’m in a battlefield

And I am losing

Because the other side is beating me..

© 2008 QuietPoet


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Thtas your best poem , so powerful, you are growing up, you learn to fight, I can feel it from day to day,

you are much more strong then you been , and you will be fine very soon Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow, lots of emotion, i hope that you find your way through this, writing is a great outlet for that, keep it up!
laceyjane

Posted 16 Years Ago


A lot of strong feelings in this poem...Hope things get better for you. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2008
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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

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