My Home

My Home

A Poem by QuietPoet
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Missing the one place that I can trust... and the place that always made ME happy..

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I woke up so tired this morning

My eyes didn’t want to open

I felt so weak and my body was sore

There is only one place that can make me strong

And let me remember what I am fighting for

So I decided to take a drive to my school

As I walk out of my car I looked at the building

I just smiled to myself

I went to open the door and I took a breath

And walked into the place I love

Walking down the hallway of all the classrooms

I had to everyday for a year, now I do every week..

Its just not the same

Why did it have to change?

Looking at all the students, reminding me of my class

I just smiled at all of them, because they deserve it

I was them once, working hard at their dreams

I take a visit to one of my Chefs

He is one of the few that has inspired me

Made me into what I am today

He is one of the reasons why I showed up for school

Just standing in the rooms make me miss my class deeply

Knowing that I can’t go back

Tears me up inside

I walk out the front two doors again

And I look back a few times

Whispering to myself

“See you later, My Home”

 

My Home

© 2008 QuietPoet


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There are so many deep feelings about school! Many leave school with loathing, or at least relief. It's wonderful that you had one teacher that inspired you. I did too. I loved learning, but not school itself. I was not socially adjusted, so felt the outsider. I never set foot in my old high school except to go to classes... and the last time was over 43 years ago.

Enjoyed your write. I could feel your emotions.

peace and blessings to you.
papaed

Posted 16 Years Ago


I know the feelings of another place being home, and having things change can completely uproot that feeling. Although my place wasn't a school. ^_^0

Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you for the sweet poem , its one of your best pics, you will find new home now, but this place would stay in your heart always Yossi

Posted 16 Years Ago


I can feel the sadness in this wonderfully written poem ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 23, 2008
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