Is It Over

Is It Over

A Poem by QuietPoet
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There is no more of me and him...I had enough. But I'm still here to help him in anyway, its just the kind of person I am..

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Is It Over

I don’t need this anymore

I want you to stop with all of this

Why do you keep dragging me onto the ground

My body is already bruised enough

So please tell me it is over..

You keep fighting the feelings you keep

And you tell me there is none left

But when I tell you I’m dating you go crazy

I ask you why and all you give me is “I don’t know”

I told you I wish you knew

But we will never know

So please tell me it is over..

Your sad that you lost me

But you don’t do a thing to find me

Its your fault that you let me go

You had me at hello

But all I can do now is say goodbye

We can’t even be friends

Because I know you can’t be that with me

We have just been through too much

So please tell me it is over..

You left my heart damaged

I was there for you through it all

And I never got how you could throw all of that away

But you did and all you can do is blame yourself

The sad thing is I am still here for you

But there isn’t anything else between us

Because it is over..

© 2008 QuietPoet


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Hey!
It's a really good poem, and it's really sad..
I really like the ending, it's like a cliffhanger hehe when you said ''because it's all over''. I LOVE THAT BIT.
hehe. very nice. :)
Keep writing. Ooooh and i think you expressed yourself really well and said how you really felt, and that is really hard to do, but you made it look so easy when it actually is really hard.. so great job!!
Keep it up-
Love,
W.Piggy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It take time to forget, it take time to heel a woundrd heart, you soon find a new love to light your life, I am here , if you want me Yos

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey!
It's a really good poem, and it's really sad..
I really like the ending, it's like a cliffhanger hehe when you said ''because it's all over''. I LOVE THAT BIT.
hehe. very nice. :)
Keep writing. Ooooh and i think you expressed yourself really well and said how you really felt, and that is really hard to do, but you made it look so easy when it actually is really hard.. so great job!!
Keep it up-
Love,
W.Piggy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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QuietPoet
QuietPoet

Las Vegas, NV



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Hello, my is kylie, I havent been on here for a long time, i haven't written in years so bare with me. Reading all my old stuff brings back a lot of memories. I have a husband and twin girls, i would.. more..

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