Broken

Its what I am going through with my family...its really hard right now...

 

Broken

Its 3am and the yelling begins at the front door

We didn’t want to be in this situation

But we are because you make it this way

Your slowly pushing us away

What are you going to do when we are gone

We have our whole lives to be some body

And I am not going to let you ruin it..

I love you to death but its time to let us go

Your daughter is happy with the man she is with

Stop trying to take her love for him away

I accepted him now its time you give him a chance

I can’t watch another tear fall from her eyes

Because it breaks my heart in two

I don’t want to see her go

She is my other half

You make me feel like I am a disappointment

When I have started my life

I just fell into a hole and I will lift myself back up

You won’t listen to us because we are young

Its time you listen to what we have to say

Because when it becomes that time

When we want to move out

Your going to have to accept it

And be alright..

I feel like I have been beaten

Because I am broken

How am I going to get fixed?

Reviews

[W.Piggy]

Heya!
It's an awesome poem, really great.
I love it so much cause it's so deep and written with alot of good words.
i love the ending tons, when you go... 'How am I going to get fixed?'
It's like a great cliff hanger. :D Really great.
Keep up the awesome work... can't wait to read more. :)
Love,
W.Piggy xx

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I feel that your writing about this is so intense and full of emotion. I really hope things get better. Thank you for sharing such a personal part of your life. Debileah

[Pikkakard]

How sad :(
You have a wonderful way of capturing your feelings in your poetry.
I love how you ended it with a question. It almost seems like there should be a 'to be continued...'

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[Pikkakard]

How sad :(
You have a wonderful way of capturing your feelings in your poetry.
I love how you ended it with a question. It almost seems like there should be a 'to be continued...'

P

[Adela Muresan]

Your sweet and sincere manor of expressing your feelings, is astonishing even with the lack of euphony of this poem-rant.

The ending is very touching.

A.M..