ALONE

this is the first so...yay

the feeling of being left out-

not liked by anyone

where your throat is dry

and your lips stick together and won't open,

just like an old door stuck

in the doorway.

where your eyes, like the walls of a weir

And won't open because

if do

the walls will burst

and the water will rush out

Reviews

[Tree Bark]

awa don't feel lonely and crying-like :(

[Quiet Key]

thank you lots :D and now i don't feel like the only one.

[Shadow in the Dark]

Nice poem I can relate to those feelings all the time.