We all have our dreams and wants. I just wrote this. I hope you don't mind me posting it here, it seemed appropriate. It all adds up to the same, not getting what you want equates to being alone. i used to love riding and you capture it's freedom of spirit in this delightfully universal read. All the best for 2008, Tai
She wanted to take you to Ireland
To cuddle up in a cute cottage.
To be wild, green and free
You and her rolling in grass.
A writer's paradise at heaven sent last.
Pixies and the occasional Guinness glass
That's what she wanted
A retreat for you and her
To curl up by an open fire
With you stroking her desire.
Kissing her, extracting a purr
Of happiness
With her healing your hurts
day by loving day.
Raising you from grey.
We can do it together,
But not this way.
Alone, we both sink.
Finding paradise?
Never! Not without
Each other's hands.
okay, this was a good write, but a tough read. very emotional. your heart is there in those words for all to see. each line is a beat, those lines that repeat.
even the word "alone" is alone, in the end. well done, querida, well done.
faith, hope and love, tristan
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Let's start anew, without the prejudices and pains of the past to haunt the beginning of an era.
Querida is not my real name, but it has become me, in my years online. more..