Enchanted

A guy obsessed with a girl he can never get

Enchanted…

I knew it was wrong, and by no reason was any of my actions right but I couldn’t help it

I couldn’t help being lured into the lustful temptation of her divine beauty- it beckoned me, drawing me closer, every time she crossed my line of vision.

I stood from afar off like I did every single day, completely captivated and enchanted by the innocent purity that radiated from her little perfect figure.

Never have I believed in perfection, never have I believed the concept that one could be enthralled by a mere female specie but that changed when she came, that changed when my eyes beheld the most perfectly sculptured creature that I have ever seen. The creator definitely spent extra time on this one and without doubts I was certain she was an angel, dropped from the heavens.

Before that encounter I was deeply sure that I was incapable of being subjected to baser emotions but one long look at her radiant beauty and her countenance that seemed to outshine the sun, I knew I was a goner, drawn deep into the very thing I chided people about, drawn into a vortex of intoxicating feelings and emotions. 

Everything about her enticed me, it was like she was designed to intoxicate the male species, especially me. Her skin was flawless, fair and spotless and sometimes I dreamed of having to touch them, to feel their exotic smoothness and drown in the awe of such perfection. 

I was indeed charmed by her spells, bewitched by her enchantment for never has it been recorded that such beautiful influence have ever existed. I was deeply fascinated by her humble self, her blinding sweetness intriguing my curious soul.

Many times I watched as she trailed along the paths of the river, cautiously watching nature’s wonders while I watched her. She would stand firm, her posture relaxed and ladylike, under the sun, bathing herself in its light, the rays accenting her magnificent beauty. Her tresses, the color of the midnight would spill down her back, flowing in natural waves as she swished and turned. Her eyes were as blue as the oceans radiating a mystical glow that engulfed me in pure bliss. She was indeed a bundle of daunting beauty, a delicate creature born to feed my eyes with her awesome wonders.

Her smile was dazzling, easing up every pain I ever felt, taking me from a known realm to a place anew, a place of fantasy and sweet dreams. Her eyes would twinkle as her lips are lifted up in a sparkling smile and no creation ever made could come in comparison to her compassionate smile, not even the prettiest of garlands could compare and when she spoke or laughed, the sound would reverberate as sweet melody, smoky, and soothing as the music of the wind. Her voice was neither too loud nor too low, they were like the sound of solemn lullabies, the rhythm of every inflection she uttered luring me into peaceful delight.

Her heavenly graceness and seductive influence made me long to touch her, long to feel her, long to inhale her alluring fragrance  even though it was crystal clear that it would never be possible. It was luxiourous watching her day and night and though it sounded like I was a creepy stalker but truth be told I was nothing but a young man mesmerized into oblivion by the wonders of a female creature and in my vacant mood would I sit and conjure all forms of pleasant images of the dainty damsel who seemed to have weaseled her way into my heart, breaking down my walls of defense with so much ease.

She was like a drug and I was an addict, making sure to take in my daily dose everyday but sadly I never seem to get enough.

She was a light attracting many insect but this time only one insect-- me, lulling me by her eyes, her lips , her beauty, her purity, her sweet innocence and every part of her. It was beyond mere attraction, beyond lustful desires, it was beyond a phase of love, she was indeed my obsession and truth be told

I WAS GLAD TO BE OBSESSED!

Author's Note

Feel free to critic, it has a poetic sense and is a mix between a short story and a poem....enjoy

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer. You made situation and thoughts come alive in the story.
"he was a light attracting many insect but this time only one insect-- me, lulling me by her eyes, her lips , her beauty, her purity, her sweet innocence and every part of her. It was beyond mere attraction, beyond lustful desires, it was beyond a phase of love, she was indeed my obsession and truth be told
I WAS GLAD TO BE OBSESSED!"
The above lines. So good. Thank you for sharing the amazing tale.
Coyote

[Bala Gorthi]

And, I am glad to read this beautiful write.. Though whole story is just what was given in that one line, I your craft kept me grabbed to the content till the last word. Your script is interesting to read even though the story doesn't move further and I was held by your write to the last word of the write.
That is the real beauty of your work, right from the tittle to the last word..
Look forward to a lot from you...
Thanks for sharing this write.. Keep writing.