The truth

The sweat driped down as I strudy the book self my sister Zoze wanted built,up. It was heavy but thankfuly I had been working out the past four months,she had worry painted over her face as kicking dirt and rocks Zoze walked this way.He r eyes of pink were darkend, probly been crying.Her boyfrined wan't the most modest, in facte the planet had aggred that he shall be banished and I was assined to lead him out to the lancher.
She probly wanted to tell me to canle so she could have an  extra day with him befor going. I wouldn't be able to do that. A Wetall is always faithfull on the duties assinded to them.
''Allcar,I need to ask you of some thing.'' Zoze had all ready thought out the spech I saw her wrinkls of counstration start to form, I know because when we were kids Sheka would make us give five resons to why we should do thing or get things we wanted,so Zoze had practiced speches over a dozen times befor she hit 17.
''Allcar,Im...Im...'' Zoze couldnt speak she just cover her face and let tears fall. I sat the book shelf down and walked up too her and stod there, she hated to be touched and hugging wasn't going to help her any more then words.
''Allcar, Im with child.Its his,I dont know what to do.'' Zoze wisperd,she dried her eyes and looked up at me, her eyes were pink agine,a gentle,shade of pink.
''Does he know?'' I asked,if her childes father was to be bansed with out this infoo he would be able to come back and take the child. ''No not yet I wanted to tell him during dinner and make a plan for him to see her when she would turn 10''
Zoze moved closer to me, ''Do you think it would work?"
''You should have told him sooner,this isnt good not only is he leaving his girlfriend but his child too!And you guys havnt even thrown an grennsted!'' I shok my head this is bad I thought, I turnd to finsh the book shelf, and when I carred it to my truck, my sister left to make her boyfriends last meal here.
''Tomorrow is going to be hell'' I said to my self, loading the other orders in to the truch I started dilivering the orders ,I could tell I wouldn't return home till 8 hours from now, and one order was acrouss the planet, even thou our planet was small, it still would take a good 6 hours.
Finnally dilvering the last iteam I had only 30 mintues to get to the meeting place were I would take Him away. ''Oh crap hopfuly I still have some travling fuel left.'' and with that last word I pushed the butten to get me right in front of a building the read ''De-living''
Turing off the enjane I wiped the greas of of my face. ''Good day juje''
I said as nice as I could to the old man at the door, the door man was an out cast, like Zoze boy friend he was scedualled to leave in two weeks.
''Sorry Im late'' I called to the room, and found a saet near the back of the room I just enterd. I was cold and the floor needed cleaning,badly. The seats resamble dthouse in church but a bit more batterd. And the wall's paint was chiping,it was big enoughf to seat 80 people, well if the out cast knew that many people who would even show up.
''Zoze did you tell him?'' I wisperd to her,she had came to set next to me. ''Yes and he brock up with me,he baned me from his life and told me to go die,all becuase it is a girl,not a boy,'' She replied thru tears. ''Wow didnt know he was a dick guess that why hes banshed from the Planet'' I siad a bit to snarky caused Zoze shot me a look of hate thru her tears. ''It is time to leave you had the chanch to change but you must go for you dont want to'' the leader sai thru the mic. ''Allcar lead him away'' I stod up and meet him and taking his chains lead hin out,''So we'll take my truck cause I want to'' I said to him, and while helping him in to the truck I hoped I would get a new truck.
After and hour I finnally started a confersation. ''So you wanted a boy and got a girl,hm?'' I looked him in the eyes and shock my head, ''A child is a child you should just want it healthy and hope its urs.'' I lloked back hoping to have stung some thing, you just dont go hurting my sister like that!
''I dint want my child to ever meet me, Im an outcast, I dont want sham or her to ever feel sham.Thats why I said the things I said,No child of mine will have to see there outcasted father.'' He looked out the window and after some time, I added ''Well the kids going to be teased since theres no man in the picture,so You could have helped that,but what ever is youre last wish I guess its cool.'' I turned in to a long drive way.
''My wish and last want was for you to be her dad.Sorry if thats not youre style but the Juje approved so no worries there.'' And he opend the door and closed it he walked thru the gate and sat on the chair were an short little maan pressed a butten and he was gone,pulling out of the drive way an heading home seemd longer then going there.
-2 months later-
''Zoze why didnt you mention that his last wish was for me to be the dad?''
Zoze just stood there her belly swollen, sorry but you've been busy and the baby isnt due in till three months from now and I was going to tell you'' she looked down and shoved some rock in to the ground,she looked back up and went in the house to make tea. ''God woman are so complicated hu son?'' Sheka said as she walked with me in to the house. Zoze was leaning back in the chair, eyes closed. ''She has been sed latly and that doent help any one, Allcar You look like youre going to murder some go to bed,Ill wake you up when dinners on the table'' Sheka Hushed me to bed.
I looked around the room I sleep on when I vist and in dstead went to my old room. I was worn down a bit but the carpet and wall coloer were still as bright as ever, the bed was made and the toys were in a pile,the landry was gone and I picked some old papers of the floor and set them on to the desk. I dont know why I stop sleeping here.So nothing eles To do I fell a sleep in the old bed,and woke up because I rememberd exactly why I changed rooms whe I was 10.
''Mom the dream came after me'' I said hurrly after she scould me for changing rooms.
''You shouldnt have sleep there you know every time you see a pic of the cirlce you deam agine.''
''I forgot so I sliped up,but this is comman isnt it mom?'' I asked the question we  all avoidied when i was younger. Sheka looked sadden and slowly serving dinner shook her head. ''I kept it a secret becuase this could get you banished and I wanted you to be well'' She sat done accross from me ''So you kept it from him?'' Zoze suddnllye cried out, ''All these years and you never told him?'' She got up and looked at me then back to Shekaa, shaking her head she left the table. ''Want some more food Allcar?" Sheka asked Me. ''What are you hidding from me Mom?'' Sheka sighed and follwed Zoze,up some staries I was never allowed up.
''Were we going?'' I asked and we enterd a room that resembled a baby boys room.
''This is were we put you for the first time, and then had to give you a new room because of this.'' Sheka moved a sheet and I gasped.

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[Weaver]

LOTS of spelling glitches in this:
"driped" - "dripped"
"strudy" - "study"
"book self" - "book shelf"
no comma after "built"
comma after "It was heavy"
"thankfuly" - "thankfully"
period, not comma, after "four months"
"she had worry" - "She"
comma after "over her face as"
comma after "rocks and dirt"
"He r eyes" - "Her eyes"
"darnend" - "darkened"
"probly" - "probably"
"boyfrind" - "boyfriend"
"wan't" - "wasn't"
period or semicolon, not comma, after "the most modest"
"in facte" - "fact" - comma after
"aggred" - "agreed"
comma after "banished"
"assined" - "assigned"
"She probly" - "probably"
"to canle" - "cancel"?
"befor" - "before"
"assinded" - "assigned"
"I need to ask you of some thing." - This is awkwardly phrased. Try "I need to ask you something" or "I need to ask you about something" instead.
"had all ready thought" - "already"
"spech" - "speech" - period after
"wrinkls of counstration" - "wrinkles of concentration"
"speches" - "speeches"
"befor" - "before"
"17" - "seventeen"
"Im... Im" - "I'm"
period or semicolon, after "couldn't speak"
"up to her" - "to"
"stod there" - "stood"
period, not comma, after "stood there"
comma after "touched"
"any more then words" - "than"
"Im with child" - "I'm"
"Its his" - "It's" (short for "It is")
"I dont" - "don't"
comma, not period, after "what to do"
"wisperd" - "whispered" - period, not comma, after
period, not comma, after "up at me"
"agine" - "again"
no comma after "gentle"
The grammar and punctuation are no worse than what most people write, but the spelling errors make this very hard to read; sometimes I can't even tell what word you intended. You can't trust any word processing program for grammar checking (none of them work properly), but a good spell checker - or at least a dictionary - is very useful.

[Queenofpenticales]

Thank you...im not the greatish speller!ill probly revise this chapter after im done with the next part!