An evil master

life what is it really? a song i wrote about what life does.

you hit the ground,
the unbearable sound of you're brain slashing away
why leave this way?
get back up and play!

Don't wait up,up up up
life is going get a hold of you
evantuly.

 I'll be the sinner.
of you, I swear!
no more colors
no more flare,
humanity is gone.

*what to do?*

wake up
wake up
wake up
 theres new blood to spill
the war is far from over,
don't you see this silly human?

The angles have lost there place,
aren't they spouse to watch over you?
turn of you're music, its getting old
its useless any way

Don't wait up,up up up
life is going get a hold of you evantuly.

 I'll be the sinner.
of you, I swear!
no more colors
no more flare,
humanity is gone.

*what to do?*

what
to
do?

...instrumental...

poor wings of free doom,
life,you're such a teas
just put us down here to watch us
take take take,
what fun is that?
does it really turn you on?

Why did we even give?
theres no point.
life just giggles at us!
it destroyed our angles, it destroyed our sins,
nothing is ever for forgivable,
but I guess it is...

so the sun still sets and moon still rises,
but what happened in between?
Life is still out to get us!
but what did we do?

life is going get a hold of you
evantuly.

 life is the sinner.
of you, I swear!
no more colors
no more flare,
humanity is gone.

*what to do?*

how do we stop life from laughing at us?
We need to stand up1
we need to unite!
just because we're little gives life any right!

so stop the violence,war and rape
and instead begun the love,laughter and smiles
we're taking back the night!
watch out life I'm going to get you back

get get get
life
BACK!

Author's Note

so do you know what im talking about?try and guess! :)
leave a comment!please, im trying to get better so there is you're golden ticket!

Reviews

[Levin]

Nice guess.* It was a fluid poem. At the beginning, I was reminded of Kiss Kiss Bang Bang, the song from Kill Bill #1. And the way it was organized was really cool. It made my eyes dance. Nice job.

[Liz-z]

Okay, I'm going to take a wild guess, I mean real wild: I thing this story is about humanity driving away the *angels* (if that is that what you meant) and leaving nothing else to protect humanity, thus, humanity dies, because we can't survive alone. And I think it also is begging for forgiveness too... That's just my theory. Good writing btw! :) and loved the way it was shaped.