Sashay

Sashay,is well 20 and going thru stuff she did not think could happen.

Sashay
by Queen Of Pentacles

The room was light up with candles,but they were still no comfort to her mind.As sounds of
the storm grew,lighting hit the ground a few miles a way.
Missing her family and every sane human comfort most people take granted for.
She cried. Tears welding up in her eyes like small spills of oil on her face. The sour taste of them calmed her down,to her surprise. ''How did I ever land in here?'' Sashay wisped to her self.
The corners of the room were filled with other people,but un-like her their sanity was gone. Replaced with vial and evil thoughts of rape and murder. Most of them had gone blind, since sun light never touches the prison.
prison.
such a nice name for the hell hole this place is. ''Why can't people see the truth?'' she wounder d to her self.She was convicted of murdering the elemental queen of the forest, but the real killer was her dearest friend's brother. Well brother is an understatement for what role he played in their lives.He was like the dad of her friend instead of brother, she barley remember the name... ''m-mm'' her face scrunched hard as her friends name finally was picked out of her mind's locked memories.
''Makiesha!'' Sashay yelped in joy.
A few heads turned toward her driction and this was not a good sing,one of the man was licking his lips,he obviously was not as blind as the others.
Sashay,moving her hand behind her felt for her makeshift dagger.
''S**t'' she gasped thru her mouth,but at that same moment the liker lip guy had dashed toward her with great speed.
She leaped backwards and hit the wall with her feet,her muscles yanked in pain as she mounted off in the wrong twist.
Smacking hard against the dirt floor,she barley rolled back to her feet as even more guys joined in the hunt for her.
Unfortunately she was able to see events and ideas of people, and their ideas involved a knife and sex.
''Well One against 5 isn't fair now is it?'' Sashay asked to group, smiling she
added ''So lets cut the number a bit shall we?'' she wiped around two of them and kicked them squarely in the back,they fell in shock, she smashed her foot on his face,the bone shoved up in to his brain leaving him at a painful and long death.
Trying not to think about what she just did, a fist hit her as she was spinning around.
She was knocked back and as she wiped the blood of her eye, she was able to donkey kick the man right in to a spike on the wall. She knew there were more out there, but ''were are they?'' she asked and hearing something above her, she looked up only to find the man had jumped on her,she was trapped under his weight! ''F**k get off me!'' and the man in supries that a woman could talk got up. ''you're such a stupid a*s Jack a*s!'' an younger looking man appeared, and it was clear he was the boss.
''Sorry half these man sex-ed out there wifes and well...'' the young man started he looked up and had hit the men that were left,mumbling something they went thru the dark prison,the voices echoed off the rock walls.
''Sorry who are you?'' Sashay asked her Gard was still up, almost getting raped was a wake up call,and he was no exception to that.
''Hey Babe what are you doing here in this hell hole?''
Sashay couldn't believe it, it was Dare,her fiancé but he had dissapperd.
''Sweets you landed in here?'' she still was in shock that she finally found him, at least now she had something to live for.
''Honey lets find a nice spot that nobody will go to!Know any places?'' he smiled and they embraced for a while and started walking.
''Well I know were there aren't and floating candles in this mountain prison. She felt some drops from the top of the cave as they went in search for a sane place to live.
But sudanly people were evry were and the attacked,One man stabed Dare,only barly becoming united with there other part of her soul, tears weld up as her scream became the only course to the madness.
''Sashay, you ok?'' a deep loving voice ran above and Sashay sat up, heavily panting.
''Babe its just a nightmare,its over.'' Dare smiled as he embraced her.
Just 4 months ago her dream had been real,but thankful the real murder came in to the light and she was released,along side with her now-husband.
Now they were happy,free and she was still scared.
She found out two weeks ago that she was pregnant. Shouldn't she be happy?
''Honey we are safe now it'll never be like that again and thats a promise!'' with that Dare kissed her and they snuggled into a deep sleep, her lips ceased into a soft smile as dreams of her future filled her head, pushing her mind in-to a
happy sate.

Author's Note

So How is it? critic or compliment! I hope it was good!

Reviews

[Levin]

The fighting scene was good, but I couldn't figure out who she stomped in the face. I loved her witty lines, but it confused me at the end when they are in prison, but they are walking towards a happy place. Then, they get released. Those are just the things that I might edit a bit, but the story line was well set, and very interesting and engaging. Because prisons are just engaging to me in general, plus the main character seemed really smart, plus the fight scene was rad. Good job.