Dark Cage

Soothing are the tears that fell,
Drop by drop until they tell
The story of their misery
A gaping void they leave,
But now at last I can breathe
now that I'm free.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting. A make you think and read again piece. There is a definite progression in this as the protagonist moves from grief to the relief that tears often bring, yet the dark cloud seems to remain and is the freedom death itself?

[MadScientist]

The freedom is the freedom from anger and sadness, like when get into a fight or or your grieving