Ocean

The Sun Is Shining
The Sand Is So White
Her Eyes Glitter
As Does The Sea
Her Smile Is Wide
Just Like The Ocean
Such Vastness
So Much Unexplored
She Couldn't Wait
This Was Now
Her Water World

Reviews

[Lorraine]

The last three lines are confusing. Up until these lines, the poem is pretty much clear and nice. The comparison with the ocean is appropriate and elegant. Also, the imagery is also very much there.

Keep Writing. ^___^