You...

For the lack of anything better to do,
I cradle my pillow and think of you.

Past the waves of the ocean,

and the churn of the sea my thoughts take motion.

Dusty roads, and empty shops,
Thoughts echo like the slap of flip flops.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful and serene. The longing is powered by great sentiments. Excellent...:).......

[Kat Leila]

Thank you, indeed longing will forever be the best inspiration for poetry.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:).........

[JC]

this makes me want to travel, brings me back to Thailand, but also a dream like state of emptiness...could be the start of a song...

[Kat Leila]

To lazy places and dreamy moments..

[JC]

I'll cheers to that...

[Pax]

very well expressed. Those lonely nights, longging hungers. That's life when we love someone, I like this. good job!

[Kat Leila]

heheh, glad you can relate!

[Night]

Well my friend i see there is an imaginative writer in you....well done.

[Kat Leila]

Thank you Sir!

[Night]

You are very welcome. =)

[R Smith]

that's beautiful Kat, has a real dreamy quality i think i will like your work a lot :)

[Kat Leila]

Why thank you...thank you kindly

[R Smith]

you are very welcome