Addicted

A Poem by JustASoul

We both are addicted it's such a shame
Our passion an ever growing bright burning flame

Youre addicted to hurting others and I'm addicted to pain
You give it I take it I whisper your name

The flame is consuming and deeply hypnotic
The silhouette of or bodies entangled it's very erotic

This flame is consuming but we can't get enough
You're grabbing and pulling cause you like it rough

I'm crying and whimpering but I handle it well
It's funny you thought I was an innocent girl.

Born in adversity raised in the fire
In the streets of Vallejo call girl for hire

We're surface level squares undercover freaks
Hiding behind our glasses we stay low key

We shouldn't be doing this.. the cycle were in
But we keep coming back relapsing again.

© 2016 JustASoul

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ReedWrite

Nice work.
Very deep words...one could get lost in them.
I like the flow and rhythm.
My only suggestion would be to trim back a few extra words here and there, to smooth out the flow of the lines a little more. Also, in the last stanza...should the word "they", be "the"? Not sure, but it seemed to make more sense as the.
This is a great piece...very powerful. I really like it.