Incomplete

We all have that belief

That we are born in pairs

And can only find relief

When we find the one that cares

Raised on it with cartoons

With their "Happily ever after"

Grew in us within our songs

Whether for sadness or laughter

So you're always on the lookout

For that certain soul

That can take you out of your hideout

The one you think will make you whole

You'd think it's a piece of cake

As it is just one

But it's not an easy decision to make

And not a battle easily won

Just one to complete you

One to immerse you with care

Where it would be just you two

And you'll no longer feel despair

That someone is one of a kind

With whom you'll share sadness and delight

The person to whom you're life you'll bind

And you'll never want to let them leave your sight 

That person does exist

You just have to look hard enough

For the one you can't resist

Although the search might be rough

Until then you are incomplete

Feeling empty inside

But never accept defeat

For you'll need that someone by your side

Reviews

[MaryOwais]

It's very nice how Incomplete, and The Face of Spring encounter the same subject, yet each one has a different taste.
My advice to you Que, is to start reading intensively, let the words be the air you breathe, don't let a day pass by without at least thirty minutes of reading.
You are talented in writing poems, invest in your talent, and enrich your vocabulary.

keep writing, and read, a lot.

[Que]

Well that's the thing, I'm not a fan of reading at all hahaha. Zero concentration and boredom :P every time i try to read a story I reach a point where i'm just too bored to continue >.>