Humanity

One always needs a believer

One always needs to believe

One must find a belief

Or one shall fall too low

 

 

One always needs a love

One always needs to be loved

One must find a love

Or one shall fall too low

 

 

One always needs a friend

One always needs to be a friend

One must find a friend

Or one shall fall too low

 

 

One always needs knowledge

One always needs to know

One must find some knowledge

Or one shall fall too low

 

 

One always needs a thing

One always needs another thing

One must find a thing

Or one shall fall too low

 

 

One always wants or needs something

One will never change

One will always want another thing

Or one shall not be human

Reviews

[Sam Freeland]

The giving of love
God's gift to us
came from above
it was ever thus

Now we need to do
this and more for you
your being is sacred too
He wanted this for you

Let us all begin
to find a way to not sin
trying harder to care
will likely get us there

My humble plea
says much about me
I know you also care
in your writing its there

When a few of us begin
trying in what we write
Writer's Cafe
will bring others more light

It matters not what I want
as I try to tell you
that your poem didn't flaunt
the truth about what we must do

Thank you for giving
a suggestion we need
we may find a better way
in our efforts to lead....sam

[The Mad Prophet]

Stunning, and very true. Very well writen, and yet goes next to My Humanity, inwhich I felt I lost (My Humanity is a poem I wrote). I like this one alot, and I think you for sharing it, and your views on the subject.

[Michael X]

belief is at the fore-front of your writing.. and the design centers around the terms set forth in the first
stanza..in three terms.. believer..the one who anticipates in faith.. blindly and perhaps at times foolishly ..

secondly there is property of believing which opens the concept to what defines the believer.. the cause
and focal point- to what brings into light the third term-belief- the act of putting faith into action..

but what has a person if he or she fails in believing- there are many aspects to ponder in light of the
meaning- for instance..in the second stanza there the soul description of the importance of love in

life in general .. followed by frienship .. those things that give indivisuality and personality- existance
to all human alike.. for without such.. the conscious may cease to exist- the element creating heart.

[Robert Wilson]

Very catchy. I like