The Difference Between the Two

The Difference Between the Two

A Poem by The Boring One

What's the difference between the two?

Between loving and being in love with you?

The difference is quite clear to me,

Even though it's something you can't see.

One is a true emotion

A feeling, more than a simple notion.

The other is infatuation,

It's all in your imagination.

© 2016 The Boring One


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I think you should put the second line where the first is. The words 'seem to' is weak. I would take it out.

You hit the nail right on the head my friend. Infatuation has diluted many a relationship. It also wears off over time. Love is an emotion. It ca cause great love and it can also flair up emotions to a heated state.

Nice writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The Boring One

8 Years Ago

First off, I'd like to thank you for your input. It means so much to me to know someone cares enough.. read more
Gray

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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I'm a high school junior. I don't have a very exciting life, and I live in a small town. I'm just the boring one. The one you wouldn't look twice at. The nothing. The one who sits locked away with boo.. more..

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