Manuscript

Linear peculiarities are important. Follow the lines downward when reading.

Lifes     Make

A          Friends
Crime    And
Stand    Live
In         Extatically
Line      But
Listen   Always
Learn    Know
Do        Theres
Say       A
Play      Fine
Think    Line
My        Between
Way      Living
Don't     Greatly
Be        And
Hollow   Abusing
Be         Time
Sure
To
Follow

Author's Note

The two lines and lack of stanza is intentionally there to stagnate the poem in a consistent manor, directly reflecting my lifestyle at the moment.

Reviews

[Que]

Very clever poem. The layout is something different and you chose your words very carefully, choosing the correct ones.
The message is clear and important.
Great poem, loved it :)
Cheers.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting set-up on this poem. I don't remember reading with this style in a poem. I like the meaning in the words. Need friends and to enjoy life to have peace in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote