Time follows in a close second

I know I said I wouldn't be releasing anything for a while but I found this whilst cleaning out my clutter, its a poem I wrote a month or so ago which I forgot about. Make of it what you will.

Watch as he travels through time and space,
Passing beauty whatever the case,
He passes a cow, a building, a tree,
An old Lady fallen on her knees,
The desperate Human,
The death looming,
Everyone too,
naive and hurried,
to see it,
I watch,
as I pass.

Reviews

[Que]

"He passes a cow, a building, a tree,
An old Lady fallen on her knees,"

Those two lines really impacted me: suppose it shows how we are now all so accustomed to those terrible things in life that we hardly even stop to think, we just take it all in - as if they were a cow or a building etc.
At least that's what I got out of it :)
Brilliant job, I'm adding this to my library: loved it.
Cheers.

[Liza]

The dimension kept building and You added more depth when the last two lines read, I watch as I pass....pretty cool stuff.

[-K]

i like this. Makes me think. Good job.

[ब्र&#..]

this is a beautiful set of words you have formed here

[Blossom]

amaizng!! sharp and vivid imagery. Love the execution.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

surreal~ Dali~esqe painting in words~ sharp imagery extending beyond the verbal nuances opening eggshell imagery into elsewhere conscious pleats~ imaginative as well as imagination inclined~

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

whoa flyin
and amazin

[loowzerX]

this is really good. I enjoyed this very much. short, captivating and thought-provoking

[Matthews Reggie]

what a wonderful use of words! apt, creative and strong... and also thought-provoking...

[Fabian Franco]

This is good for even a poem you forgot about!
You are really great. I enjoy your works.