Life's ambiguity

Life is somewhat of an uncertainty and definately the phrase "Life doesn't come with a manual" springs to mind.

Grow, Grow, Grow

I reap what you sow

Punishment indictment

A tsunami of wasted excitement

 

Hallucination, Hallucination, Hallucination

Here I stand God’s only son

Self-vindictive-narcissist

On a yellow brick road covered by mist

Author's Note

The poem is regarding my troubles of late with me needing a change and falling victim to society and its unsophisocated humour, the typicality and conformist nature of my friendship group and my wanting to get out.

Reviews

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

a great poem...i like the way it talks on the reality of life and the way it can strike peoples mind and heart....

[Matthews Reggie]

special... really special poem...

[Closedown]

Really held my attention the whole way through, striking in it's shortness.

[Hellslastwarrior]

A tsunami of wasted excitement.
Wow mate thats an awesome line :) when i read this poem it was like look down on adream of someones life as they grow amd descover the new parts of the world they never imagined.
i liked the little play on words On a yellow brick road covered by mist- enjoyed this poem an it created so many different images dancing in my head :)
Nice 1 mate - good rating from me.

[Michael X]

wow! the opening the middle ending all consistantly powerful and
held my attention to the degree that masterful poems are expressed,
you've done a powerful, effect job creating ambience, 100