Life's ambiguity

Life is somewhat of an uncertainty and definately the phrase "Life doesn't come with a manual" springs to mind.

Grow, Grow, Grow

I reap what you sow

Punishment indictment

A tsunami of wasted excitement

 

Hallucination, Hallucination, Hallucination

Here I stand God’s only son

Self-vindictive-narcissist

On a yellow brick road covered by mist

Author's Note

The poem is regarding my troubles of late with me needing a change and falling victim to society and its unsophisocated humour, the typicality and conformist nature of my friendship group and my wanting to get out.

Reviews

[Satchmo's Gal]

This is far out man.

[JENY]

Wow…
In 3 or 4 lines….
You packed a great deal of things….
And it is profound and exiting….

[AlieahRose]

I SEE WHAT YOU MEAN...
YOU MAKE A HUGE POINT...
WITH HARDLY ANY WORD...
ONLY A AMAZING WRITTER...
SUCH AS YOUSELF...
COULD DO SO...

[An owl on the moon]

Each line seems to be a powerful poem in itself. These glimpses are filled with rich thoughts and colorful emotions that set the stage for that canvass of life.. trying to see how the brush strokes align..

[Charles]

Nice visuals for such a concise read. Good write.

[My Fair Lady]

Yes! Love works about self discovey.

[Fabian Franco]

Just amazing. Loved it.

[Alex Antony Anderson]

a wonderful creation....i love the way it ends...a lot of powerful emotions portrayed in the right amount

[Amy Bumpas]

Life full of let downs, fallen promises. We think we're on
the right road, then something falters our vision.
Just my own point of view. Great poem!

[loowzerX]

wonderful piece. I love the ending most.