Am I in love with you?

Another peom but a romantic one this time

Am I in love with you

I ask myself this question every time I see you

 Every time you walk by my heart beats faster

When you smile at me when you see my face

Am I in love with you

Or is it just lust that drives me to your arms

But can lust drive a man to become some protective

To do things that he wouldn’t normally do

Am I in love with you

If so then the only question I have for you is

Are you in love with me

Author's Note

Thanks for the feedback.

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awesome love the way it flows and the choice of words of a day old question "Are you in love with me?"

But do work on your punction of "." and ",".

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

Excellent rythem and word choice :D

[Miss Coral]

Raw and emotional; nicely done. I would include some punctuation to help define the rhythm, but otherwise, very nicely done.

-Coral-

[Moonflower]

This was very raw and inquisitive. Nice write, dear.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Ah...the typical, heartwrenching question...the doubt which throws one into oblivion...one moment we think our love is returned...we are paranoid...at the slightest thing, we think our love is unreturned...I am in agreeance with Shnerd :) Don't let grammar discourage You!

[Short.Nerd]

Every time my heart beat fast when you walk by

I think that should be beats faster. But I'm not sure.


Or is it just lust that drives to your arms

And I think that should be: me into your arms.

I love the ending of this poem. Good job (: