Am I in love with you?

Another peom but a romantic one this time

Am I in love with you

I ask myself this question every time I see you

 Every time you walk by my heart beats faster

When you smile at me when you see my face

Am I in love with you

Or is it just lust that drives me to your arms

But can lust drive a man to become some protective

To do things that he wouldn’t normally do

Am I in love with you

If so then the only question I have for you is

Are you in love with me

Author's Note

Thanks for the feedback.

Reviews

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Love or lust, the question of a lifetime. How can we know which is true?

"But can lust drive a man to become some protective"

This is a start, but is your love returned? Nice job!

[The Batman]

Short and simple. There is clear emotion behind each sentence that impacts the reader. It is truly great. Love is a mysterious thing that most of us will experience. Great job.

[Roe]

this really good i love the flow of it

[melissa]

Awww this is a very sweet poem love it

[Sukriti Suki]

Is this love or lust....the ever lasting question....I like this poem for the honesty and the point on the face question.

[BowlofSarah]

I like this poem. I captures the fast moving sometimes chaotic thoughts that those emotions trigger. I asked myself the same question and 5 years later I am still not sure whether it was love or lust but I know that it was an experience i wouldn't change.

[Jacques]

this is a mindblowing and creative concept . keep it up

[Reviews]

This is incredibly simplistic with not enough layers to honestly call it a poem at all. There needs to be depth, imagery, feelings, emotion rather than throwing down some thoughts onto a page and going voila, a poem! This isn't even really a stream of consciousness. It's merely a jumbled collection of ideas.

sweet. short, precise, and sweet