Weird Times in Oscar High Pilot Act 4

Act 4

 

INT. Sarah’s office Next Morning

 

Sarah was sitting behind her watching Abel who wearing some new clothes lying on the couch.

Sarah:

So Abel…

 

Abel:

Call me Lucas

 

Sarah:

Lucas, so you decided to be called by your original name.

 

Abel:

Don’t make it such a big deal, doc.

 

Sarah:

I have to ask. Why did you decide to stay?

 

Abel:

I have been searching 5 years for something and I think I finally found it.

 

EXT. Outside of Amanda’s house - afternoon

 

Amanda is sitting in her window doing homework. She took a brief moment to look out at the sunset. The camera pans out and outside in the woods Lucas Cain is looking at her.

 

Sarah (O.S):

What is you been searching for?

 

Lucas (O.S):

I don’t know. Hope, purpose, but whatever it is I found it.

 

Scene fade to black:

 

End of Episode

Author's Note

I sorry I really don't like this ending and its mostly I going to change, but not right. I know most of you guys are probably thinking what half-ass ending, but I promise I'll work on the ending.

Reviews

[melissa]

I agree with cherry blossom you did a great job I love the ending

[Senseless whatever]

The ending is fine. As is it leaves enough opening for the next scene to go anywhere. Leave it and you can screw around with the readers by not being predictable.

[Cherry Blossom]

i LIKE THE ENDING i WONT GIVE IT AWAY YOU DID A GOOD JOB! I LIKED IT ITS NOT EASY TO WRITE A STORY BUT YOU DID IT!