Exactly What I've Been Waiting For

And then I feel his fingers like
Satin flow across my skin
And I think I could stay this way for
How can my heart beat so fast
It's like it's trying to beat
It's way from my chest
And into his heart because all I feel 
Is him
And all I can think
Is him
And all I can taste 
Is him
Am I doing this right
Would he like me to
Satin up and down my arms and across my
Why is it so hot in here
I think I could burn forever and ever and ever and
Cushion pressing against my spine and suddenly 
Things are exactly right and where they're 
Suppose to be
But oh, I can't believe it;
I can't believe he's
actually
kissing
me 
back. 

Author's Note

Fact: I've never been kissed, but I'm hoping someday it feels like this.

Reviews

[Arianna]

for never being kissed, you captured it perfectly!
amazing emotion. :)
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[Kearra]

AMAZING poem!!

[Call Me Blu]

Thought 1: AMAZING
2: Great image and emoton
3:Great story and wording
Luved it! :)

[Cynthia]

its so sweet and romanic, I've never feel anythign alike, hopefully I will, Its great! Amazing! Wonderful! So sweet and romantic which warm my heart up! The ending is really great asll well, one word per sentence, thats really amazing!

[Call Me Blu]

Wow. I had my doubts about reading your poems because you book is so good, and I wasn't sure your level on poetry. Way to prove me wrong! some poems end up boring me to half death but this was quite interesting.

[KAREN]

This one is beautiful and romantic! Well written!!

[Eileen]

Oh I miss that feeling. Beautifully put. Everything's so sensual and erotic from only a simple kiss. Amazing.

[WhatsHerFace]

This is soo good. I love the unfinished thoughts and the way everything jumps around. Its like we're inside her head. Its really awesome and I love how it ends.

[Jeff]

The way you wrote this make me it work perfectly with the subject.

[Christina East]

Wow. I love how you have some incomplete thoughts, which sort of create the impression that she's breathless ( which would make sense of course). I love the idea of satin, too. Very sensual. ;) Good job.