Relationships

A Rondeau about the people in our life

Illuminate the sparkling trends
of busybodies we call friends.
In this web of slippery vine
Contains what's stronger than moonshine,
        Questioning to amend or end. 

Fragile will only break, not bend;
Only a matter to ask when
distortions begin to align;
       Is it worth it?

So who can I trust to attend,
Or to whom can I trust to lend
A helping hand by design
In order that our hearts may shine,
or to patch up the seamless ends?
     Is it worth it?

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Brilliant! Love the structure, love the rhymes, love the message (and those two stragglers are fantastic!) Well done! Much enjoyed!