Texas jack's true colors

Texas jack's true colors

A Screenplay by quinfinn
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this was written by jack....on my new poetry site, where i graciously left w/c for, to avoid this very individual..well, he and few others. don't be ashamed jack, these are your words. not mine!

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Oh how much I miss this place
I swore I’d never leave
Found no one to kiss my a*s
On Hello Poetry


Moved my poems over there
About 400 plus
But no one seems to read my work
Nope, no one makes a fuss


Maybe it’s my profile
They think it comes off rude
That’s why I get no schmoozing
Or sickening platitudes


No one to say I’m wonderful
Or pat me on the back
Just like Johnnie Mac does get
Or Frieda and/or Jack


If I’d have just apologized
And shut my f*****g face
Then maybe I could still be here
Writing at this place


But noooo, I couldn’t bring myself
Lower to the ground
There’s not much lower you can go
When slithering around.


So’ I’ll just pop in now and then
I just can’t seem to quit
But rest assured when I am here
I’ll try to start some s**t

I know you won't understand this, but that is ok.

© 2013 quinfinn


Author's Note

quinfinn
note that jack employs these words as if i were speaking them. that's half his problem, thinking he speaks for everyone else... oh....and for the record, attempts at reconciliation were made and ignored...in fact they only garnered further attacks....form your own opinions.

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Well Quin, you have do do what you have to do...I'm sorr you aren't on this site any more...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

quinfinn

11 Years Ago

i havent left, Marie....i was going to, but finding this at my new poetry site changed my mind...i w.. read more

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quinfinn
quinfinn

somewhere in the mountains, NC



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i am Quin.i love poetry..don't request me to read your books, not interested. i encourage youthful writers to expand on their skills, embrace their gift, i don't tolerate big egos and hard critics, ca.. more..

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